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Post by kazaki03 on 2011-05-07, 15:55

Yesterday, I tried to fly. But everything's still the same.
The endless cycle of dreams, the never-ending game.

Since I was a child, I dreamed of high blue skies.
Following Peter Pan on his way to the rise.

So I jumped, and jumped, until I can jump no more.
Look's like Neverland is unreachable after all.

But years have passed, and I gave it another try.
I imagine myself losing gravity, trying to fly.

But as every other dream ends, I always fail.
No matter how much effort, always a sinking sail.

Was I really meant to live in a fantasy-less world?
Just accepting scientific opinions and doing what I'm told?

I want to be free. I want to relax in the atmosphere.
But heaven is always pushing me down into the rear.

Listen to me, I won't stop or give it a rest.
Because I'm not satisfied until I give my best.

Someday, I will definitely soar into the sky
Or will I only achieve this dream after I die?

Kristel "Kazaki" Cuadra
2011.05.07


Based from a real series of dreams.
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Post by phio_chan on 2011-05-07, 18:35

Awesome! Great work, kazaki. It's been a while since I write or read a poem, haha~

I like how you tried to make the sound at the end of the sentence matched for each verse.

I'm looking forward to see more! smile

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Post by kazaki03 on 2011-05-08, 00:17

Thank you very much! I was irritated this morning but your comment made me happy now. smile
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Post by phio_chan on 2011-05-08, 00:46

Ah, really? I'm sorry that you were irritated this morning, but glad that you feel happier now. smile

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Post by kuroi neko on 2011-05-08, 01:06

wow...I like this!!! It's amazing... big smile
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Post by kazaki03 on 2011-05-08, 17:55

@Kuroi Neko: Thank you!
@Phio-chan: *hugs* smile
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Post by Kyoki on 2011-05-09, 14:33

Kazaki-chan!!!!! That was so awesome and pretty! I don't read that many poems, but I really enjoyed and like yours!
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Post by kazaki03 on 2011-05-09, 18:07

@Kyoki: Thank you very much! All you need for making poems is good or bad experiences to be turned into poetry. smile
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